All Comments on 'Harry, Kate & Jan Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wasn't nothing erotic about pissing on somebody

the worst of your chapters to date.you got bored.sometimes writer fall off the mountain and just write anything.i'm a fan and this relationship is fucked up for a fantasy.i like your story,but i pass on this chapter.

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