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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent

Vanessa needs a follow up and hope you will find time to put pen to paper soon. Fine work.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

It's a good story. I think it would've worked better in third person. I'd like to see more of Vanessa and an introduction to her changing world, and how she adapts to it. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I agree with the other comment. A great story as there are very few stories that deal with the modern aristocracy. Third person allows the reader to glimpse the motives of other characters other than Vanessa.

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