All Comments on 'Hauntings of the Unexpected Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
theme went mia...

Loved the first chapter, but you completely tossed out the whole hauntings/ghost theme on this chapter. It is kind of sad, I was hoping for more, there was a lot of potential there.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
it didn't even follow the original inane premise

and turned into an excuse to write about depravity.

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