by mondotoken
This is not a suitable point to end this story, too many questions left unanswered.
But please get an editor. The changes in POV and the misspelled words spoil the readers pleasure.
I gotta admit I've never read an erotic horror story before but this was written by one of my favorite authors so I gave it a try. It was arousing as most of the stories are and the plot was interesting but the end part(?) freaked me out. Whats going on is that school some kind of place for ghosts?
A really good story with a good plot and excellent character development. I hope you were planning to continue this story. I ngave you 5-STARS.
Excellent story, really enjoyed . Thanks and hope you will continue with it.
Grea story but PLZ EDIT YOUR STORIES. LOTS OF GRAMMAR ISSUES. There's no reason a wonderful story has to have so many distracting errors. It takes away from the story. Also you swiched from first person to third person and also switched verb tenses.
i accidentally started reading from the 3rd page and thought that shit was hot as fuck.