Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereAnd I knew Joe was throwing that party and his parents would be away while Steve's parents would be around. The solution to my problem seemed to be obvious - Steve and I would stay over at Joe's. God knows his parents' house was big enough and there were enough spare bedrooms. I called Joe up and asked him if I could stay over.
"Sure Hayley," he'd said. "With Steve or with me?"
I'd laughed. "With Steve of course, Joe, what did you think?"
"That I might get lucky."
"No chance." I'd giggled.
"Well, okay." He sounded like he wanted to tease me but he wasn't going to. "I guess it's about time Steve loses it. You too Hayley, you guys have been dancing around each other for years, so you finally decided you wanted a taste of the old pork sword, huh?"
"Jesus Joe!"
But Joe had just laughed. "Okay okay, no problem, you guys stay over."
I couldn't wait.
So come Friday morning, as I mentioned at the beginning, there we were; me beside my Dad in the front of the car, my Mom in the back, on our way to Dim Sum with Dad's clients. And I planned to make love with Steve tonight at Joe's party. All was well with the world! But first, Dim Sum!
- COMMENTS
senceUL9 months agoLobing it from the start. For me you are the Steve King of erotica. Slow moving with great charictor build and just enough sexual content to keep it HOT!
Lets hope this one has a proper end to it?
Anonymousover 3 years agoI always enjoy your writing. Hot, and we'll put together. This time however there are a few errors that should have been caught in editing.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoOr, I guess it's WOMAN!
ChloeTzang's (great name) descriptions make you feel like you're right there.
Or inside Haley's head.
Or Haley's skin.
Feeling some of what she's feeling.
(And Haley feels a LOT. Of sex ... and life.)
5 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma
ChloeTzangover 7 years agoAuthorThx :) - a vivid imagination is probably more correct. LOL.
Chinese parents? Well, in real life only my Mom's chinese and she was brought up in America so I can't speak from purely personal experience here. Chinese parents in my experience run the whole range, altho most are fairly socially conservative and almost always put a huge emphasis on education - both at school and after school. That whole "Tiger Mom" thing has a strong basis in reality. So Hayley's parents really aren't that typical of chinese parents in many ways.
I'm kind of writing them in as ABC's - american born chinese, altho as you get thru to Chapter 7 you find her Dad is actually a Triad boss and her step-mom, Rachel, is not all that she seems.
I'm redoing the whole plot for Hayley to make it more action thriller / sex driven. Hayley was the first story I started writing on LIT and my plotting when I started was non-existent, something I'm trying to work in with Chinese Takeout in particular right now, but with the intention of adjusting Hayley's story as I go forward with it. Anyhow, glad you're enjoying Hayley as well.
joeytherooover 7 years agoThank you for taking the time to write this. You either have a lot of experience or a very vivid imagination I really felt I was eavesdropping on Hayley and Steve,just the sounds and smells were missing.
Are Chinese parents still that strict in these modern times?
