All Comments on 'Hazel Ch. 02'

I enjoyed the story. It was well written and thoughtful. I wouldn’t mind reading more about Leo and Jake’s journey. Thanks for a great love story.

A lovely love story wrought with excitement and lots of yummy play! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Once again brilliant writing. I love the you bring out all characters importance in the story. A very satisfactory ending to a beautiful and mysterious love story.

Please continue writing, never stop.

Part of my comment when I read Hazel was that there should be a second chapter. And then somehow I missed the second part when it was posted. But now I've found it, at last... and re-read both parts together. While I enjoyed the whole story, I think that the first part was the stronger of the two---the second part seemed a little rushed to me. And unless I missed something somewhere, at the end of part one Leo was wiping Jake's memory of him yet at the start of part two they are together. I think also that the story could have gone a bit deeper into what drove the evil Elise. Still, despite my reservations I've got to give you five stars.

I really enjoyed this story from the beginning to the very end. Their story is inspiring and unique. And different, in a really good way. Thanks for sharing this with us.

I think you did a good job at switching between both perspectives. This can get quite confusing at times but everything was easy to read/understand (even though english isn't my first language) so that's a big plus. Also the concept of a soulmate is so wholesome, I wish there would be something like this in real life - or maybe I just haven't found them yet ;) Anyways thanks for the great story. Hope there is still more to come.

Huge fan of your writing style and your mastery at weaving such a beautiful and intricate love story. The world you created - the magic and suspense - was done fabulously.

I appreciate your craft and really look forward to reading more.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful part of yourself with us.

Awesome story! For me the perfect mix of fantasy, suspense and eroticism. Thanking you for sharing your writing with this community.

Perfect ...... What a sensational wonderful story ...... Your writing is fabulous and gripping me totally, you're so extraordinary talented ........ And on top i do like magic storys and this one was enchanting, lovely, romantic, heart gripping and ........

Wow breathtaking story! Definitely book worthy! Had me at the edge of my seat from beginning to end

Absolutely incredible story, I loved every minute of it. Thank you 😊

This so needs to be turned into a movie. Action, danger and romance. what's more is needed? Absolutely amazing in every way.

Good story, a different type of story with hogwarts thrown in! Thank you!

This world could be turned into a epic story.