by Krazy35
Wasn't big on the renting her out, overall story was luke warm at best.
to rape sombody any excuse is a good excuse.
Overall, this is a pleasant little story. But that bit at the end about renting Fawn out was unnecessary, and far beyond simple retribution. IMHO.
-- KK in Texas
pretty good story but the end blew it. didnt seem that kind of submission. that one sentence about renting her out ruined the whole tone of the story.