All Comments on 'He Had No Idea'

Despite the many grammatical errors it was a very promising and enjoyable spank story. Keep an eye out in your editting from now on. Looking forward to your next installment so that I can give you 4 stars instead of 3.

I just could not get through the first few paragraphs.....it was like it was written by a second grader.....sorry

You were given good advice on your previous story to use an editor. Advice you should have followed. Spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors are evident in almost every sentence. Please don't listen to the advice from "headtrip", he can't spell either......

Learn English

If you can't find an editor, you should do us all a favor and post somewhere else in a language you've mastered.

The author needs a class on English grammar and should be using "spell-check", these shortcomings make the story virtually unreadable !

I agree with all the comments made - the story may have been a good one but I couldn't get past the appalling spelling and apparent complete lack of understanding of the English language.