by claw69
You just HAVE to tell us more please--Loved the whole scene and want to hear about you becoming MORE of a CUM SLUT with your wife present. Having her there to guide several cocks into her willing SLUTS mouth and ass.
Don't listen to people who overly criticize. Unless they are submitting their own stories, they shouldn't be judging anyone elses. To each his own taste. Your story is your own and is therefore a product of you, and no one can take that away from you. You keep telling your stories and some people will appreciate and some will not. I write them for those I will touch and for myself. To hell with the rest of them.
I totally agree with keep trying, fuck the idiots that don't like your writing; you are writing to please yourself firstly, and those who find your stories enjoyable secondly, screw the rest.
god i love this. lust for something like this myself. would love to have the chance to get away from my wife, to meet a man, see him naked, kiss and makeout with him, suck his wonderful dick ... and get fucked for the first time. it just sounds oooo erotic.
that is my dream is to suck a cock while i am being sucked then i want him to fuck my man pussy an fill me with his hot cum
Dude, I am a bi female and this story made me sooooo wet. Don't listen to haters baby...keep writin'!
Yes, I want to gently and slowly suck your cock as I wear my Cotton Panties and Fuzzy Sweater while you finger my Soon to be dripping Ass and then have you gently fuck my ASS and cum all over and in me. YES Fuck my Ass and Pinch my nipples under my sweater. I am stroking myself so hard wishing it was you.
A+. This is my dream. It am 59 and would love to find this. Especially my bride ther videoing it.