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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Convoluted

Not a good start to a serial story.

There is nothing to grab the reader

ManosHandsManosHandsabout 7 years ago
I disagree..

...with anonymous. And looking forward to the next story.

Thanks!

visioneervisioneerabout 7 years ago

A different take on setting up a D/s story. The narrator strikes me as jealous of the young woman, which adds tension. Good work -- looking forward to the next installment.

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Curious to explore the edges of my fantasy life. Curious to know where my mind will go if I banish the thought police, from time to time... Questions and comments are welcomed.