All Comments on 'He Needed a Proper Girlfriend'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 7 years ago
What a great yarn!

A great story...well told...with some laughs and fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So Far so good

Very enjoyable but stretching the Imagination for sure.

My ONLY wonder was Charlotte referring to herself7B95 as "queer".

Have a few Gay and Lesbian friends and never have I heard them refer to themselves in that manner.

NowiswhenNowiswhenalmost 2 years ago

In aerospace it is "fail safe" . "Fail soft" only deals with software.

Yeah. Tech guys read this stuff. And nit pick.

SierraSpriteSierraSpritealmost 2 years agoAuthor
After 6 years, all nits welcome!

Actually, Marjory was absorbing details of the software controlled architecture for operating the solar array, especially the emergency actions taken when circuits went over voltage or amperage.

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