All Comments on 'He Said not to Wear Knickers...'

Slave is different from submissive.

clarify relationship, is she a submissive or slave; and why didn't he set forth a set of rules for her to follow? Other wise a good story.

She is a submissive, in a consensual switch relationship, that invariably is more of her dominating him, than him her! Omitting the rules is my fault, in my head when i am writing, it's under rules that are always established and the same (and have been since the beginning), so i dont think to mention them in the story itself! In my sense of the story, she is a 'slave' only in that she is devoted to her dominant and consentingly used for sex / sexual activities as mentioned, as he commands. I hope this clears things up! :)

And an author should be punished with a very low score for his complete lack of imagination.

Not sure what the 'lack of imagination' comment is about. Found this a step above the usual writing here.