All Comments on 'He Wants Both Girls Ch. 02'

The story and the characters are relatively good. Some typos as always. But the ending, and even the narrative to have him drop his girlfriend, were unnecessary. A third part would've been nice.

All in all, I'm here to dive into my sexual fantasies and not to be reminded of the traumas of my own life. What a twisted joke.

I can't wait for more!!

While there was definite promise in plot, and the descriptions were filling, the lack of command of the English language made the story difficult to read. The ending was rather unecessary, but could have been more.

Wonderfully hot story. Nice touch of real life at end. Can't wait to see next chapter and see how his lust for both girls is resolved

This is an especially good complication for teenagers whose emotions, hormones, and thoughts are so confused. It really looks like you are setting up a 3 way relationship with both girls sharing the boy, and him watching them together.