All Comments on 'He was Always There Pt. 04'

Loved it, a nicely paced hot and sexy story with a promising ending that leaves the door open for more to be said yet.

Or just showing off by using words and phrases that most readers won't ever use or even understand.

Hope this is NOT the end??!!!!!

But I have to ask what your first language is. I have trying to work it out and is frustrating. Either you have written directly in English without realising your first language is still prominent, or you used google convert after writing in your main language. The words are too extravagant and in places wrong, so I guess you wrote this with the aid of a dictionary and thesaurus.

Very good read