by DevilKeepsTheBeat
If you really wish to write then please make sure you are able.
It is not lay back ,it is lie back.Just one of manny errors.
Bobledoit: Pot and kettle, my friend, please check your comments for grammatical errors before criticizing the grammar errors of others.
Devil: very hot story! I wish there were more to it. As a virgin with a submissive bent, I enjoyed the rich emotional narrative of the woman as the man forcefully ate her pussy. Steamy stuff. ;-)
This was great. I hate the stories that have intros and backstories that go on forever...this was brilliant and straight to the point, thank you.