by LeanneSinclair
It's not often a story sucks me in so much that I don't realise it has a a twist in it's tail. Thanks for posting such an interesting story. Pete
I was "sucked in " too.
Nice one, Leanne. When the story went into "improbable" I wondered whether to bother continuing, but I'm so glad I did!
Ah, role play....the bottomless well of creative sex. Not enough people write it well, but this is quite powerful. Thank you!
What a very likeable story. The twist at the end makes you look at it all again, but does not render the teacher-pupil scene any less sexy or convincing. Neatly done.
Nice story, creative couple and hopefully taken from real life experiences. Thanks for lovely read.
Odd twist not sure what the point of it was, certainly makes all the history lesson in the setup even more pointless (I doubt they have a magic announcer in their bedroom) and the action probably could've gone a bit further.
Still Good though