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- Healed by the Wolf 02
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All Comments on 'Healed by the Wolf 02'
by loststars
- 45 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoIf this Killian person turns out to be the sadist that gutted and ripped her brother to shreds somebody's gonna get hurt
PallasAthena123over 8 years ago1) he first saw her 3 years ago
2) the rest of the pack would surely recognize his scent
It was probably a brother or uncle or something.
Anonymousover 8 years agoKeep going. It's great so far. The chapters need to be longer, but I have a feeling it's going to be a wonderful ride. Hurry up with chapter 3!
Hethen129over 8 years agoWill she consider it fun to torture him? He is a Alpha and used to being in command more then likely it is because he is a Alpha. It seems in a lot of these stories it cones down to these mates treating thier alpha like crap and making them run a gamut just for the sheer pleasure of it. So it seems that she is going to take some pleasure and payback for how others treated her....that just seems odd to me
ariesgirlover 8 years agoIs it me or does Vera seem to come off a bit bitchy? That maybe too strong of a word but I thought I was reading her this way in the last chapter but wasn't sure. I understand she has the walls up because of the way she is treated but I could be wrong.
Why is she making Killian jump through hoops to prove himself? Shouldn't she be proving she is worthy also? It takes both to make the relationship work and they both have feelings that can be hurt by the other. Wouldn't she be mad if Killian had given her the same waiting period?
Anonymousover 8 years agoI liked this chapter more than the first one. I liked being inside Killian's mind and I like Vera she seems like a strong character. can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymousover 8 years agoan alpha on the ropes??? and caused by his future wolfless mate.
more more and soon PLEASE lol.
Quickfingers8over 8 years agoThat last line...this is going to be fun...makes me think she's already made her decision and is totally ready to be his mate, but wants to toy with him, and not even to really test him, but just because she can. While that's pretty uncool and petty of her, I can kind of see where she's coming from, being the daughter of a powerful alpha, null or not. I can't wait to get the next chapter!
Anonymousover 8 years agoLoving the chapters, and I am really liking that you are giving us Killian's POV also. Keep up the great job!
cantfightfateover 8 years agomanipulative with a touch of bitchy. Hope she proves she deserves him and doesn't break his heart.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI love this story, can't wait to see what secret her father doesn't want her to know. Please also make the chapters longer.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis is really good. But it's just a teaser there needs to be more please!!!
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis is a great story and well written. Excited to read the next chapter. I love that she is a null and afraid of werewolfs but is apart of the pack, It's made it a great change of story line from what is normally written that I have come across. Keep up the good work and keep posting
Anonymousover 8 years agoUPDATE PLZ ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGOOD
Anonymousabout 8 years agoMore more more more more! Please! I have to know where this is going!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoPlease continue ,when you find the time. Your a good writer.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoDid no one get the herondale reference to one of the best book series in the world?
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoFrom the first time I read it till now each time I hope you will continue this story.. Love the spark between Vera and Killian...
Vemonezzaover 7 years agogreat story...please wen is the next chapter? HURRY UP PLEASE........
evebroughtanaxthistimeover 7 years agoOi, what happened? This was such a sexy little story - you had my toes curling. The thing that freaked me out the most, was 'the big secret' that everybody but her seemed to know about. Maybe you could write about that first, or is that the reason you gave up? Whatever it is, it can't possibly be that bad. It's a story, after all...I hope. Although it would have been nice if it was real, minus the way her brother died of course. Be a celebrity and finish the story. ( Hey, that rhymes!) Just look how many people are supporting you. It rarely happens, you know.
Anonymousabout 7 years agodouble dittos on all of the above. come on dear, it's been two years! give us readaholics a break. xxoo
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYou write clearly with purpose
Both are worthy of further chapters
The "null" concept is clever and it should be exploited ie don't turn her into a wolf or other were for many chapters
Perhaps give her other talents
djb
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI saw your new story and went to your author name. I started reading the Healed by a Wolf story and I loved the start. The characters come to life, which is not always the case. Please consider finishing the story or let us know if you finished it elsewhere. Well done!!!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoImpatiently waiting for chapter 3 of Healed by the Wolf! Please finish this story, since you are back.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIt's tough to lose all that work with a crashed computer. I hope you can finish Healed By The Wolf. It's a good solid storyline and a joy to read.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoYour writing is great, please let us know how it ends!!
