All Comments on 'Healing'

no background as to why she freaks,but i can guess she was raped or assaulted in some way.is this going to be a threesome thing with her doing both guys from the club? i hope not since if she was assaulted in some way then she wouldnt be into a non-normal relationship that would leave her not in control til she was comfortable with 1 huge guy much less 2.

If her "tragic past" includes being assaulted by a man, which it seems like it is sense she freaked when a man touched her, she wouldn't be comfortable being in a relationship with ONE guy, let alone TWO.

It looks like you might have hit a Home Run first time at the plate. Great beginning to story and am looking forward to the next installment.

Can't wait for CH. 2!!!!!!

Any menage where there's one woman and multiple men in a romantic relationship is really hot! Please don't leave me hanging....

Can't wait to read the next one!!!

Its great writing craft.

It appears she has a history of abuse, rape?

So no, involving her with 2 men would be....very very bad. She would be lucky it appears to ever trust just one. That reaction she had shows a lot of damage.

Very good writing, am wondering how you will get her involved with a guy in a believable way.

TOO short and needs a lot of editing.

But you forgot the story. Waiting for ch 02.