All Comments on 'Health Club Adventures Vol. 01'

continue this story..... would love to read what happens next with these two. Very hot read!!!!!

For a 1st timer that was quite interesting

Great work, please continue this story. I look forward to reading more.

...please!

Thanks for this articulate, arousing story. The hot student comes across well. Just make sure to separate the two voices clearly to avoid confusion. Look forward to the next parts!

What a wonderful ending. As usual with an unfamiliar author I checked your profile and saw the brief info about Chapter 2 etc. to find that he must have become aware quickly that she had been around. So when I got to reading this Ch.1 I loved the way that it ended. Loved it! I am about the read Ch 2 and subsequent chapters. Encore!