All Comments on 'Hear, See, Speak'

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 8 years ago
Damn

Never give up. No matter what. It seems love can develop in the strangest of circumstances. Not much else to say. Lucky it's fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow. Painful and powerful. This is fiction but what is sad is that such things and worse happen in the world.

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtabout 8 years ago

Fucking hell, that is terrifying. ._. It's very well written though, but it's blood chillingly terrifying, all the way to the soul.

themanredthemanredover 5 years ago
Truly Special Work

Wow this is grimdark, in such a fascinating way. The bleak reality of it pervades the entire story, which is moving. Their attachment to each other, your description of Rosa's resignation when facing her torments. Really brought this story together and made me feel something.

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Hey, I'm the guy behind the stories. I chose the name CaringAndDemanding because the multiple facets of sexual control are what interests me most when it comes to erotica, whether it be in BDSM or Ds setting, or in a noncon/reluctance setting. When I write a story, I want the...