by psyche_b_mused
Way too short, but I'm very greedy. I like your style of writing and the story so I will be looking for updates.
An excellent story, but the chapters could be longer. Very well written with few if any grammatical/spelling errors. Keep up the good work.
I cant wait to see what is next please dont keep us waiting for long.
I hope you can continue posting at this pace... or maybe take a couple of days more and write a longer chapter. Either way, I'm really enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to more.
Please, please, please contiue with more chapters of this, am LOVING it and would love to read more!!!! Excellent writing, keep up the great work!!!!! Hope to read more of your works!!!
I just found this story and I am completely hooked already. If it was a book I would not be able to put it down.
Please, please continue and update soon :)
I like this tale, it's different than most. Keep up the good work.
love how this story is unraveling .. it captures the interest fast . i enjoy it so far I hope it will not take to long for you to add more am getting drawn in .. must have more.. it really is a great start...