by psyche_b_mused
I've just read this chapter I know I have to backtrack and catch up with the preceding 11 chapters. I like the narrative and pace of story telling you use. You convey the nervousness and feelings of Mary really well, when her uncertainty and nervousness about the possiblility that she could be. The detail provided about the political and social structure of Gargoyle clans gave enough detail to illustrate contrast for Mary while avoiding an overload of information on detailed nuances.
A great chapter, i only spotted a single miss type. Hope you had a good christmas and i look forward to many more chapters of Mary and Aiden this year. PJ xx
I never thought of gargoyles in a sexy manner before, but now I do!
You also gave me pause to think of how arrogant we as humans are towards other species. Your statement saying "either you're human or less than human" was spot-on.
i have sat and read this story for the last two days...i simply loved it. u are very talented, can't wait for the next chapter.
I am SOOO lovin' this story! I re-read the part where Mary told Aiden she was preggers quite a few times b/c I was so happy. I hope she and the baby are okay.