by sexygirl76
Wonderful story.. I was hoping they would end up with a child somehow.. please write more
This is a true romantic story. I feel the character development of this story is awesome. I know it is a story but it comes across as being real. It shows the writer has a good knowledge of what they want to portray to their readers. I am glad for the happy ending, (a sucker for happy endings) that I hope there could be more. Stories like this one moves me and makes me want to read more from the author. Please keep writing stories like this and you will have a fan for ever.
aclassylady
Didn't read this due to its title but I got bored and decided to give it a whirl. I'm glad that I did. It was a very good and complete story. Thanks for writing and taking the time and putting in the effort to post it for us.
A bit too much sex too early. But, love won out in the end, and that's all that matters, Keep writing, a little less sex, a little more wooing and you'll have a perfect story.
Couldn't stop reading. Great job sexygirl76. Please write more of this.
Dharmie.