All Comments on 'Hearts Upon the Sea Ch. 01'

Other then some puncuation and word choice errors it was okay. my only question is if you actually did any research on what a Scylla would actually look like. Traditionally it would be a six headed monster with 12 feet and each head having three rows of teeth. Now, if you are talking about Scylla BEFORE she was transformed that I understand but just for future reference, make sure you do you research on Greek mythology first.

Sorry forgot to put this in there for this story: This Scylla is based off of the one from the Monster Girl Unlimited Websites version which comes from a Japanese manga book about Classic monsters made into lovely manga style creatures, just search for Monster Girl profiles on google and you can see them.

Very nice!

You Bastard! How dare you do this to me...oh right there's more already published. Sorry. Carry on. There's nothing to see here.

Just asking after reading the comment before me...