All Comments on 'Heat'

by Dirty Kitten

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PennLadyPennLadyalmost 15 years ago
Sweet

This was fun, thanks. Very cute, romantic and sweet all at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Beautiful

This was one of the more beautiful erotic stories I have read in a long time. I love reading sensual erotica written by a woman. Thanks for a great story.

Claus

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yummy

I live firefighters. Matt sounds divine. Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow

this is a fantasy of mine. i work for the department and ii do think of my crush's like this.

UnconsciousEmissaryUnconsciousEmissaryabout 2 years ago

Exquisite writing. It feels like you labored over every sentence, turning desire into poetry. I can only aspire to write more like this. Well done. And thank you for sharing your art.

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