All Comments on 'Heat'

It's got the makings of a great beginning. I'd love to know the rest of the story.

more please

Please continue!!!!

That was a fun exciting read - please keep it coming. There has to be a backstory there.

but it was a little bit lacking - no plot, no intrugue, nothing to go on - hot sex only goes so far

Hope you make it a series.

Good start.

Please write another chapter soon.

Finally after a long long break I continued this story. Chapter two is called "Lost", the new Chapter 3 is called "Stranger".

https://www.literotica.com/s/stranger-25

Thank you to everyone who waited so long.

Excellent work. The descriptions seem to parallel persistent arousal disorder.

So, after an unexpectedly long time I'm finally finished with this story. The forth and final story named "Found" can be found at

https://www.literotica.com/s/found-10

For anyone wanting the order it's Heat, Lost, Stranger and Found. I hope it's been worth the wait.