All Comments on 'Heated Desire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Who are these people?

No one has any idea. You forgot to mention that.

Impo_64Impo_64over 6 years ago
Having those kind of thoughts...

Having those kind of thoughts while driving a semi late at night is half way to a serious road accident...I have to agree also with the other comments: This is a sex scene between two people we dodn't know nothing about...2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

ok for a scene but where's the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Its difficult to hold one's attention when they don't understand what you're talking about.

And the paragraphs are too long. Not bad, just confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I went through it several times

and still can't figure it out? Where is the story?

Prince020402Prince020402over 6 years ago
Wrong category

Erotic Couplings would be more appropriate

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
How are these people?

Is this a long haul trucker making a booty call with one of his lover's? Are they married? This seemed like just a bunch of sex. And not very good sex. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LOVING WIFE

A real loving wife story.

"she through me on my back" try"threw"?

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Nice story.

Enjoyed it. Especially.no cheating.

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