All Comments on 'Heather Ch. 02'

but the conversations were a bit stilted. Try saying out loud just what you are trying to write - then write down what you actually said. 'Twill come out a lot smoother, I think. In any event - thanks for the effort.

very hot, can't wait for the next chapter!

The story you just read is true, the people names, the ship name, the business name and personal assistant's haircolor were changed to hide the real players out there in the wild.