All Comments on 'Heather - My Special Stepdaughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
My kind of Woman!

That Heather is a sweetie. I wish I had a daughter just like her. Even if it killed me, I'd die happy. Tex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot!

That's one really hot stuff, love how that daughter treats her daddy... please continue, I'd love to hear more about these friends of hers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i really like it

i want to know what happen to the other girls

CapewideCapewideover 12 years ago

Please finish this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
5 gorgeous cheerleader virgins?

That just veers into manifest absurdity. 5 stars, but best to leave the story ending just like it is.

Huntergirl30Huntergirl30about 11 years ago

Great story. Where's the rest of it? Five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

me and my step daughter and a few of her girl friends have had many good times her one galpal mechelle and me and my step daughter mmmm yes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lovely story

if another one could come where linda accepts anything that would be really hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting but it was ruined.

You should have just kept it between them. Adding more was not good. Ruined the relationship aspect of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wonderful.

Somehow, I think this might be based off of the McCartneys. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Thats the end? Kinda left hanging, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You can be affected but not effected.

Something has an effect but not an affect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great story and well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
stupid

Unless mom was wanting to tongue some twat this would never happen.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

What a great scenario, Heather bringing home the entire cheer leading squad for dad to pop their cherries. While it would be great in reality for Heather's daddy the complications to his marriage and then the emotional attachments to all of the young horny cheer leaders would be astronomical. But then again it is just fiction and a well written fantasy. Well done 5 stars

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