All Comments on 'Heather Revealed'

I just had the gut feeling that the stranger was going to turn out to be her husband. The suspense was good right up to the end however.

Great "loving Wife" story for a change.

Thanks for writing it.

Well you did good - very nicely set and delivered - erotic - but the best part was the ending twist - good show - maritally well done - Thanks and Regards

I wish I had someone to come home to as senuous as Heather. You say in your profile that all your work is "pure fiction". But I wonder if something of Heather lurks inside you, 2lips?

nice story...great set-up and timing. wish Phil had been a bit rougher on her, but that's personal taste. (actually, my personal taste would've been that he was a lot rougher on her.

This is a great story! It wanders and twists nicely at the end, making us realize that often couples are longing for the same thing------

Maybe this is odd of me.. but I was in tears by the time I finished reading this beautiful story. Apparently it struck a chord inside me with my own insecurities. I really enjoyed this story. Please continue to write thusly.

Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind comments. It's been a while since I've felt "inspired" to write, but I do feel the need to continue writing overtaking me again. Please look for my future stories too. So glad you took the time to leave a comment.

Superbly writen 2lip4u. I hope you are inspired to write more. Dan

This story was actually quite romantic and sweet but dirty all in the same package ^^ I very much enjoyed it.

The only thing that spoiled it for me was what is such a wholesome NICE, innocent lady doing owning a huge dildo? would have been more fun and humiliating and spontaneous if she was caught using a cucumber or banana or something? Still a damn fine story!