All Comments on 'Heather Visits Simon'

cuck shit.

Hopefully she gets an STD

and the cheater still lives life and lies to the utmost, TK U MLJ LV NV

This was just a huge mess, scattered thoughts all over and just more Literotica garbage.

She said she was a married woman,

not a wanton slut.

She was wrong there, wasn't she?

She was both.

I like your writing technique bunchles.

Don't like sluts, so I didn't like the story.

We readers, who don't like cheating

sluts, are inclined to give this story

bad rating because of the morals.

In future I therefore recommend

you start a story with a warning to us

about the content.

That way we, who hate cheating, won't

read the story and you can avoid

bad ratings :).

I have a feeling you are a good writer

and don't deserve bad ratings.

Stated she had been loyal wife for years...but within the first few paragraphs you indicate she had affair with doctor.

Your story boils fown to a one afternoon in serial cheater's life. She has no morals, no regrets and certainly was never loyal

Beyond boring!

Was this a story? I don't think so! Just a whore making house calls. She is always getting new clients...Soon she will be visiting Roger's house too...Then we ask ourselves: Why in hell wants this whore to be married? 1*

her husband will know. She'll smell of sex, and he'll know. With pizza delivery coming, she won't be able to grab a quick shower.

Dont like the stories and comments,,TOUGH SHIT

If she worked for Domino's she could deliver both Pizza & Pussy Hot and fast within 30 min or its free and she wouldn't need to have a husband. After all, she said in the beginning: " She was a married woman with a loving husband. She had no time for love." Give the guy a break, lose her.

Nothing new. Not well told. Dull. Predictable. 1*

The author did a very poor job on this story.

This story lacks of creativity, shallow, lox context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

this story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of itme reading all the way through.

This was as casual as any. So what was the point of this story?

Never mind. Its not important, obviously.

You have a great opportunity to improve. OldBearSwitch

This was boring. And pointless. And hollow.

Sure, I have problems with cheating wives stories, but I can still appreciated a good romp, if the sex written in it is hot. However, when the couplings are as un-erotic as this one... seriously, what's the point?

Scratch this and try harder next time, author.

Idiotic!!! Where is the link to an amazing erotic "Loving Wives" story??? A slut who betrayed her husband?? Thats your story?? Idiotic!! I get more exciting and voluptuous stories at each cheap porn site!!!

There was just enough suggestion at character potential (although no development)_ that the story felt right. We may speculate at her sudden need for more or different sex; pregnancy? Her calculation and suggestion that Roger might benefit from his discretion lets us think her secret will be out eventually.

She knew what she wanted and Simon gave it to her, hard and deep. Win. Win. I can vouch for other wives who sometimes need a hard fucking from another man to keep the marriage on an even keel. The exhibitionism was also very erotic. I like being watched and my husband lets it happen. Sexuality is the backbone of marriage, and when it is fully satisfying there is bliss.

Love the way these stories have women give there pussies away for free. You wonder why men have no respect for women. I read a comment woman needed to do that to keep their marriage from going stale. If your marriage is just based on sex then it will fail. If you have no respect for your spouse to cheat on them then why stayed married. The hurt and pain takes along time to go away especially betrayal. This is exactly what this story is betrayal No things won't get better I have seen to many marriages end in betrayal. While one stays true the other falls for some guy who didn't pay his dues in a marriage. He didn't earn the sex she gave it away. Sorry these stories just show how much marriage is a waste of time

Only perverts or brain sick readers approve wit that crap!!!

READ Literotica's GODDAMN categories of stories. Also read the goddamn tags too.

It specifically says - and I quote this.

"Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more."

For fuck's sake. People are STUPID as fuck.

A shallow life lived poorly.

1 star - a cheating slut anxiously waiting for the first sign that her husband has been watching and knows every single detail she worked so hard to keep secret. That will end this little infidelity.

I think that the pivotal point where the victim/cheater finally realizes that the jig is up and they have been caught red handed - gives me a great feeling of satisfaction. I hope the author adds the next chapter.

Another slut woman. Imagine that.

No real point to this. Just a rambling with no explanations given.

Not really a story.

Bill S.

@the rise from arsches:

So if we read the tags, we have to like it?!!!? And if we don‘t read it , how could we say, we liked or disliked it?!!?

It’s a free page and free to read everything and to like or dislike what ever we want. Got it, rise from Arsch-es ?

Wasted time