All Comments on 'Heather's Bus Journey Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Very enjoyable story so far...keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
oh no

first 2 chapters were great, quirky and anew angle but now you are going the sadistic path and it becomes just like hundreds of others.

HeatherLaneHeatherLaneabout 6 years agoAuthor
Oh No Don't worry

Hi. Thanks for your comment. Don't worry, as soon as I have time to write Chapter 4 I will have Heather escape and continue her adventures without venturing into bdsm. If you have any story ideas for me to write then please send me an e-mail. Love from, Heather

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it!

Hi Heather!!

I really enjoy your stories! It's hot with the humiliation ;) .

Personally, I'm ok if the story does take a BDSM path.. but I would want you to keep the Non-Con ;). I'm looking forward to the new chapter!!

-Innocent Venus

airesseekingairesseekingalmost 4 years ago
so naughty

Love your stories. Innocence seduced is the sexiest. Please write more

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

Heather's round ass is noted, it is truly a fine asset. She can rub her clit on the bar stool until he returns. Chapters are too short.

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Hi. I like to read stories a lot. It's fun! Now I'm going to try to write stories too. I know it's not easy to do but I'll try my best.

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