All Comments on 'Heather's Hectic Weekend Pt. 01'

this was a good story, I know it is just the first one and it is off to a good start, not quite sure of the english language being used but I can at least go along with it, can't wait for part 2

So far so good, look forward to more.

I guess the "English language" bit (more than usual!) is my attempt at Lancashire cotton town. Sorry about that.

Pt. 02 will be submitted later today so should be on-line Weds/Thurs.

I'm glad you enjoyed the start. Pt. 2 is on its way.

Welcome back Heather, just what we need, another witty saga from the LimeyLady, full of sex (straight,gay,bi hell who cares) but with a strong story line and even better even written in proper English, with proper spelling. Hopefully the beginning of another long series.

I'm glad you enjoyed Pt. 01. I did intend for this latest saga to only run for three parts (Pt. 02 was submitted this morning). Knowing me Pt. 03 will probably grow into Pts. 04 and 05!

I got lost at this point. We were on Friday 26 April 2002. Alex had just been rescued and was being attended to by Naz while Heather was making out with Majid, the taxi driver. The suddenly we go back two/three years to Naz starting college and the formation and early days of the football team

D Ellerbeck