All Comments on 'Heather's Hectic Weekend Pt. 02'

by LimeyLady

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not bad

this was a good part 2, only thing I though was out of place was the title of your story "Spider goes on the rampage" well to me it was not much of one I expected him to be in most of the story, except he was only in about one and a half pages, well I am sure we will be reading more about spider in the next few parts, still an overall good story none the less

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 7 years agoAuthor
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I must confess I struggled for a title for Pt. 02. Usually (Heather's Busy Week excepted) I have no problem in coming up with something more accurate. I will do better with Pt. 03.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
not too shabby

I guess I will have to go back and read the previous series.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 7 years agoAuthor
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There is a lot of "Heather" out there and she gets up to all sorts. I hope you enjoy her adventures.

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