All Comments on 'Heatwave Ch. 03'

This story is aptly titled, "Heatwave," and rightly so. Almost from the first few paragraphs the story starts to build in sexual intensity. Chloe is an appealing character involved with the Club owner. Sex is hot right from the get-go. If you like a lot of erotic action - this story's for you!

Wow. Great detail - those 3 pages just seemed to whizz by.

As you know, Sarah, I thought the story went a little flat in chapter 2 after an exceptionally erotic opener, the likes of which, in my opinion, have rarely been matched by a debuting writer. You've obviously given the follow-up a good deal of thought & come up with a great riposte. More power to your arm & keep it coming.

Mark x

i hope the 4th chapter will be available soon....