All Comments on 'Heaven and Hell Ch. 01'

Smashing start and I'm curious to see how he'll win the boy's trust.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job but please make the next chapter longer!

hope the kiddo is over 18 or you might be violating posting rules

He's 18. If you read carefully, you'll notice I said he was born 18 years ago. Don't worry, I follow the rules ;)

Interesting characters and looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Liked the details in this and the emotion. I thought you did a much better job of effectively communicating the tension and passion to the reader in this piece (as compared to your last). The mythology is far richer as well, and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing this continued. Hektor's duality is fantastic!

What in the world did we do to make you be so mean and only write one page!!!!????? We are soooo sorry for whatever it is that we did!!! More page please!!!! Awesome beginning!!!!

I agree with Spearman1. We are so very sorry *bows down* please bless us with longer chapters. Im looking forward to the rest of the story. Keep it up!

So cant wait for the next installment!! I am in love with your stories. Please keep up the great work.

I agree more please this is great love everything you have written!

I love it!!! I love how a brute can be so gentle to such a small creature. I log stories like this.