All Comments on 'Heaven Only Knows Ch. 04'

I read the whole series, but it was with mixed feelings. It was highly erotic, and I beat myself silly --all the way to a climax. But I was really put off by your terrible spelling. You seem to be able to pronounce the words, but too often you spelled them as if they were some other word. It was also off-putting to start a sentence in the past tense and end it in the present tense. Have you been to school? Have you studied the English language? For God's sake (and the sake of your readers) GET AN EDITOR!! The site offers them for free.

This is a good story with some language problems, as already noted.

The finest typo of 2011 is:

"What is this?"

"It is a scared wine, it will relax your mind and body. Please drink it but not completely."

The concept of a "scared wine" is so lovely ...