All Comments on 'Heavenly Grounds'

Well written. Great start, but faltered toward the end with no ending - unless of course there is another chapter...

Imaginitive, well written tale of seduction. Very believable! I had guessed that the husband wasn't alone on the other end of the phone, but it made a perfect counterpoint to the wife's guilty indiscretion. Perhaps in the next chapter we'll find out who the other woman was.

Rye and Ginger

He accidently hit the talk button? Gee, what could that mean - consequence for slut wife? Or long distance cuckolding?

As the wheel turns - we shall wait eh author!

i love it, especially the twist in the end! but i think they should actually have sex, instead of oral.

Too much action, almost no seduction. Unrealistically fast 'getting acquainted' then a LOT of foreplay. No evidence Bull can actually get Sweetie's main mission (which is NOT getting drilled). (By a male interuor designer? So much for stereotypes!)

Also unrealistic that a coffeehouse would have areas THAT private! It would have made more sense for them to have gone to the house (and actually generated a few simple changes) before getting as adventurous as they did.