All Comments on 'Heavenly Love Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great continuation.

I'm glad to see you continuing with this story although it did not need it. I can't wait to read the rest of the new chapters you are writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Beautifully done

I'm so glad you decided to continue this lovely story.

The love, tenderness and sheer eroticism shine through your writing. I think you are very talented.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What a wonderful tease...

Thankfully you have returned !!

Reading this story leaves me slightly euphoric each time - your last chapter did it as well...

Please keep it going - it's wonderful.

Thank you for writing it.

Von Jones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
next chapter please

ive always been a fan of yours

but ivegotta tell you i'm dyin to read the next chapters and this waiting is killing me

please please so very please post it as soon as you can

you wouldnt understand the pain

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
please continue

I'm impatiently waiting for your next installment. Very nice story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
fabulous

nice and slow build up.extremely erotic.best story I read in a long time. keep it up.

toolman4243toolman4243over 13 years ago
2 submissives ?

This is like a story of 2 submissive that only want what the other wants so nothing ever seems to happen very fast. I mean you have a 19-20 yo guy that just made love to his mother and i have to believe that this guy does have hormones right...so then he doesn't even think about making love to her in the morning? I find it impossible that once the dam broke they wouldn't be all over each other with their new found love. Sorry, but this story has no believability in the least, total BULLSHIT.

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago

. . .if this be Heavenly Love, just let love be heavenly and. . .I'm running out of fives

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