All Comments on 'Heavy Co-Worker Fun'

by hhart708

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Name (or color) and tense switch?

And a switch in POV. Not good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
He**, I allow for writing errors...

...& correct everything in my head, anyway. I used 2 b as prissy as u are & I finally decided not 2 give a damn. If I was as prissy as u OBVIOUSLY r, I'd nvr have any fun reading this erotica at all. & I went to 1 of the biggest & 1 of the best universities in the US!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
It was good

It was alright but short and not enough kinky shit.The truth and dare didnt last very long try some more suspense

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