by claymodel
More than anything, I enjoy the psychological aspects of reluctance and the self-discovery that goes with it and you captured it perfectly here from both parties involved.
Hot, hot hot! And great characters. This needs to be a multi-chapter story.
The story has more truth to it than most might think. Good story. Even better idea.
You convey the psychology of submission very well though not sure I could take such a hart whipping. The 'dirty secret' of her whipped ass that she conceals at the end is a compelling detail.