All Comments on 'Heiress: Tamed'

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Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 7 years ago
Well Done!!

Very enjoyable!

Hope there is more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Excellent need part 2....

verbicideverbicideover 7 years ago
I liked it a great deal

More than anything, I enjoy the psychological aspects of reluctance and the self-discovery that goes with it and you captured it perfectly here from both parties involved.

gabbysistagabbysistaover 7 years ago

Looking forward to part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep going

Hot, hot hot! And great characters. This needs to be a multi-chapter story.

Lobosolo51Lobosolo51about 5 years ago
yes

I loved it - nice work

Sagire2Sagire2about 4 years ago

The story has more truth to it than most might think. Good story. Even better idea.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Real

You convey the psychology of submission very well though not sure I could take such a hart whipping. The 'dirty secret' of her whipped ass that she conceals at the end is a compelling detail.

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