All Comments on 'Helen Ch. 02'

I like it.

Please write more, it's a good read.

Thanks

Very poor story and the spelling and grammar are equally weak. Spellcheck is not enough - edit your material. I'm not going to rate it at all so you can take no consolation that I have 1 bombed it.

Helen Evans was alone and for the first time in about two hours the isolation chamber she found her self in was quite. Quite, oh so very quite.

it's Q U I E T ...