All Comments on 'Helen Learns'

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neroandthegladiatorsneroandthegladiatorsover 9 years ago
what an incredible story

please keep it going you have a good story line here

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well done

Luv to hear how her married bed goes... Maybe she could meet the godmother too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Kudos

Well done ! I liked the thought that she was pressured into the affair, but it was apparent they both enjoyed each other.

Yes, please do write another Chapter.

Thanks Don

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 8 years ago
very well written and

I love the coercion and submission. I hope there is more new first for her, thanks and I want more from you.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 6 years ago

so yummy, nice job, I had to re-read it.

kiteareskitearesalmost 6 years ago
Once things got going

It read well and the 1st tryst was very erotic.

It felt odd though as the lead up was basically just stupid. I have a picture of you kissing me and will tell your husband unless we fuck. OK let's fuck....then the classic retard in lecherville move...can I take some more pictures of you? As long as you promise they are just for you.

EzrollinEzrollin7 months ago

Coerced into sex with no more than a picture of a kiss...weak... of course since you could argue that she was easily persuaded because she really wanted it. Otherwise a good story, gave it a four.

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