All Comments on 'Helena's Hero Ch. 02'

Rest of Friday night, Saturday and Sunday to recount Helena's gift's of willingness for her 'hero'.

is Bella donna, Gina. Too many subtle hints for ther to be nothing else. Good build and great ending...leaves the reader craving more.

Lee

Yeah, I definitely agree with Lee, it seems like we're heading towards Gina becoming involved with Jonah and Helena, which should be very fun indeed ;) I imagine that before then, during the remainder of this weekend, Jonah will recieve oral sex from Helena, and perhaps even indulge in a little bondage, given the fetish-y nature of the outfit Jonah picked out for her. Also, I noticed that a tall, red-haired assistant was mentioned this chapter. Perhaps there's another avenue of erotic fun to be had there? ;) This series has lots of room to grow. Thank you for writing it.

...but otherwise enjoyable, thanks for sharing it with us!

Very likable characters, hot passionate sex, she's got the experience, he's got youth and some experience.

Love there's two more chapters.

I like your story. But the devil is in details. Indian curries as food choice for a night like that? I can't imagine a house smelling like curries to be very sexy or romantic and I like curries myself.

So far so good. I love the way he describes her taking in every detail and she is a no holds barred beautiful woman. Pardon the pun.

Ron/ cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Still going well but wonder ig Gina's going to upset thd apple cart.