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Anonymousover 7 years agoHelen's birthday fun
"for a 40 something year old"
Excessive wordiness. The wordiness is evident throughout and drags your story down. Pity.
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helensghostwriter@helensghostwriterI have a friend named Helen. I wrote her a story once, and she really enjoyed it, and really enjoys sharing them with you. As you'll see she gets into all sorts of trouble. I hope you enjoy them. :)
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