All Comments on 'Helen's Slave Ch. 01'

by VivianeGreen

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Intense!

Alex and Helen invite Liz to a little 'get-together.' Once the evening has began, Alex and Helen turn poor Liz every way but loose. HOT! Sensuous Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well developed

the girl is moved along her line of needs and desires to a totally submitted owned slut to a couple. It reflects, acceptance, safe, sane, consensual BDSM and sex, they are not the same. Very well done but somewhat surprising for a new pet all in one session. Would totally wear the poor pet out emotionally and physically.

moterhead74moterhead74over 17 years ago
Great story!

Great story, I hope you continue with the story line!

DryhillDryhillalmost 14 years ago
WELL DONE

Good story, well told and moves along at a good pace. i look forward to reading the following chapters.

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