All Comments on 'Hell... What are Friends For? Pt. 02'

by A_Non_A_Moose

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richieyeahrichieyeahover 7 years ago
Like it so far, waiting for more

I like it so far, now i'm waiting for more

skibum69skibum69over 7 years ago
Lead name switch

Great story, lead was Chris in pt1, but Craig in pt2

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Chris & Craig

For those puzzled over the name change.

Chris was the virgin name, but once he was a virgin no more he got transformed into this fuck machine known as Craig. It's kinda like Jekyll & Hyde, except he can't turn back to the timid self anymore. Eventually with enough experience he could earn a first name of Daniel and then fill the shoes of James Bond, after all he is the ultimate chick magnet.

A_Non_A_MooseA_Non_A_Mooseover 7 years agoAuthor

I’ll hold my hands up on this one, I totally dropped the ball on the Chris/Craig name thing! Just typical, you spend five months writing and editing a story, but fail to spot you’ve changed your lead character’s name. Apologies all round, but part 3 is planned, and I’ll stick with Craig from now on.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 6 years ago
Great follow up

This is a great follow up chapter, great well described sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Why the name change?

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