All Comments on 'Hell, Yeah Ch. 03'

This story is so hot. Please keep the chapters coming. Hot...Hot...Hot!!

I don't usually post, but I felt this one really merited it. I was very impressed by the writing style, the honestly, and just the real feel to it. A VERY good story. A very good series for that matter. I do hope there are a few more installments. Keep up the great writing!

Time and time again, the dialog rings true. You have a wonderful ear for conversation and both the snippets and the extended conversations sound so true to life. And then there's your grammar which is a rare bird here: perfectly correct! I've told you that you have excellent dialog and perfect grammar but feel I'm leaving something out. What? Oh, yeah: hot stories! Looking forward to the next episode or to your next story line.

Shaun was fairly dominating in this episode but, in the end, I think he'll go under -- and love it.

I loved it. Very descriptive.

Love the playfulness and the obvious chemistry you've created between these characters. Fantastic!

You are doing an awesome job. I have really enjoyed both of the story lines that you have posted so far. How about some more SciFi?

Keep it up girl. This is fantastic.

Wow!

REAL women have always been so much more desirable to me and it is so wonderful to read a story about a real woman, as opposed to a "skinny bitch". I look forward to more of your superbly crafted stories.

This story is very YUMMY!!!!

Firstkiss im gonna destroy you with a lead pipe, these are my favorite panties. Great, amazing, hot, fantastic, delicious story my friend

Oh that was damn HOT!!!!!!!

Sizzling!