All Comments on 'Hello, Old Friend'

by bmalone

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DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 17 years ago
Very good!

Some things to make it better, why did she break it off? It also seems a bit rushed, longer would be better. Overall a very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Yo

Well written, enjoyed it. Keep 'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
no

couple of assholes. dude was a doormat also.

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