by HotJRabbit
Great addition to part 1, Jess. Your stories have the desired effect :)
a decent story, and a definite improvement from ch1, this was nicely written. I did not notice any fetish aspect to the story, it seemed to be an EC story to me. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
I loved every second, the only problem is.........I didn't manage to make it to the end before I came, it was that hot!
Well written! I might change a word or two, but generally a very good, clear description of both the physical and emotional aspects of the couple's fucking.